Score: 6

"Random weird"

submission: Ring Of Fire -

date: September 5, 2008

Haha I really wasn't expecting that to happen. So I have to say the graphics were not bad but you could improve on them and adding better sound would not hurt with the overall flash. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to improve.

Score: 8

"Pretty nice"

submission: AMIG0

date: September 4, 2008

I thought the storyline was fun, cute and a little sad especially at the end when all he wanted was a friend but ended up destryig himself by accident :(

The animation was pretty good maybe try a few more colors next time but I suppose since it was taking place in a dump that would of been a little difficult but hey with a nice flash like this sometimes you have to knit pick a little. The sound effects were awesome, well done.

Score: 9

"Adorable"

submission: hamster heaven

date: September 4, 2008

I thought this story was very cute and reminded me of older televisions shows I watched as a kid. The style of animation wasn't the greatest but it worked very well for this story. The music you chose also worked well with this story and only added to the cuteness level, if you could somehow continue this story that would be awesome. I am sure your animation talents would only improve.